【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿
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* `% q1 H4 R: I( }The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% {% [- M: C* A) v" J- v: EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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5 a' S8 I  g9 t0 L! F0 O我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
/ o2 F6 k8 ?5 x6 v, X1 S- ]我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
% H7 w. A/ M1 s6 _8 o+ g' C2 RI already loved you with all my heart

" b" \6 |- t6 X+ {) }: `$ P在遇見你的第一刻
! a( Q( T% j3 q' ]. |/ @你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
$ m# l$ u) r2 }' ^- _1 fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

7 v# `" ^4 W8 ^0 }& X4 C* _縱然朝夕相處
" I4 K0 \; Z, T; M還是不能肯定你的心意

# r7 W, g! E8 ?; ?, ?' r4 w/ nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, L2 G8 Y! @$ b1 o1 _/ ~凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
* H/ G* C) Q# {8 s9 G' r+ \我也許就能了解
6 _" q* |! u& l$ a你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單的一句愛
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如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
$ F  Y1 I- y8 C1 D+ k& ZBut I never did
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( T# P, b5 O( W" M5 N愛你 想要告訴你
9 [! v7 R7 s! ]/ ~: Y8 s, ^" H卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; J( q, j$ U1 ?! N) F; X也許有一天
) k9 `) ]" Q- j. {你將從我指間滑漏
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  n$ Y6 i! H; C- E# R( R+ Z$ z( nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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$ e. H9 k$ g0 R( G4 [$ o# ]  z希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
2 l- K: y4 {8 Q' r我心底的秘密
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" e; H; w) ?4 v* A% `$ F' |& EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
. o( r" Y" Q; F2 M2 P2 r& w$ F3 N3 cEntrust my love within your heart
" F9 R' R5 y! X/ u0 n可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
1 D( U) o& p- L2 v3 g' XWhy is it so difficult to express?
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% @, g7 M* y6 e/ r) C' a: `% k8 L愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
' m1 a$ ?5 P, e8 x6 g& |& ~7 i卻還是說不出來

5 U+ P3 _6 [8 k' R) F; QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

! w6 f7 e$ O& R5 f( E也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

# d/ B" ^! T" b( A* x9 }. H9 V8 O希望今天還不會太晚
. f( I- [& v- g: @% _讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

. p, D- ~0 L2 Y) b0 [9 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

) s9 [4 B0 R  `, ~不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
: t; j. m, f' q* dEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
( e0 d  C0 {% Y  p) F收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ v  r* h' g! l* M3 W可否讓我托付給你?
* l6 |# A8 h# f, k) n# t  M托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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! Z7 F- }& S5 U4 T, o" m/ ^对唱曲参赛译稿
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ r; H; Z5 `3 p  A8 B/ c* K) R. PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 I% V. h9 m0 l4 g7 {0 e; b% \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
+ @/ z- |. `2 N) l凝視著星空
1 Z* }+ w& u& y4 d0 N) m: Y我心充滿快樂

  W8 \+ j& q9 [  Z+ G( d) f# L4 F: a1 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
2 |2 P5 J% {( k! q0 s  A月光輕吻著夜幕
8 J6 p3 A" ]( Q! `4 |星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

* ]( C; o! n- a* ^3 h0 U' c& s我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
! h& H) Z$ q+ T* [" A2 w# F終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
) ~+ `" o3 J) ]2 R1 N, b8 y我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝
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& z; y3 l" j/ M) IEvery other word you utter is love
$ r, g' n+ h% T0 h0 C% jI really want to know just how much you love me
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; {8 G/ O" t6 Q% a4 t$ t你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
2 w! P' O! u9 f7 l1 S4 }Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
# N) k4 g: U, w6 Q& G你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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4 x9 J8 J  o; G" H! ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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' A1 g6 X% \3 \. w: ?3 {, G能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ t4 m+ n' c, ]整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart

  Y  a" I( Z9 \我想看透你的心

$ ?0 R1 u/ y+ l7 o% ]; P9 Y3 DI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

; w3 |) l6 k' Z/ |2 O" h我歡迎你將它打開
2 L3 Y0 F1 y- r$ f我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

I’m still filled with fear
6 g" K, _8 F- NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

" [; H' E5 V8 Z; T我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
' ?. U8 N/ D& T. S) fI only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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; u9 {2 h3 K7 u: y- u9 B: C可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 `( @# h# {2 }5 U2 U9 k- s9 O如果我真有千百張口
5 P& Z4 N& Q3 r3 ]$ V0 Z. Q我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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$ E" k8 r! t3 X0 l  A" {Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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5 ?! @0 J# m! H& d8 x& x5 f訴說千萬個
( Z3 C( G3 e% E1 @5 O# V愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
; n* `3 F' j/ M* q- h# ^xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

7 y% w( a. |5 v: p" B  q是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒