【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; {; k) Y* b  D  n; i5 g9 ~" H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) T3 j  H4 l1 w4 u; y" B8 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' {  P$ n  n, P8 X$ I& d' L2 s2 \! JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* e9 u) F2 A! r' n  v3 b5 HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 s0 G  F  q# q. e% A$ s" DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 j  C. ~, r* z: LSeeing the sky content with its love
2 j8 O( G6 C( d% R! {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 U% p4 a1 V, w& T* L# y# r$ \5 Q8 L& QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 ^+ W8 w# M& n9 a# H* _7 q  kEvery other word you utter is love
/ q. D6 O+ I2 O" H/ K. qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 W0 Z8 Q/ L& oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" k  X! r& `) N% ]" vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* H/ K# I0 G2 {4 G- q% c+ r' H  ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 e6 q! D6 c; o+ GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 i" x2 U# e4 d# R/ n: N8 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  e# O" T9 B- z, `9 s. o. eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 ]' ^6 W7 d3 N! ~' x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' M4 H9 ~. G$ v. x2 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 O$ A' t6 e+ @* `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 P1 q  @, Y$ X) m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 b$ C3 x3 B/ _+ {/ D6 U2 s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 t! }% e4 y7 w. v3 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, r; Q7 }5 [5 P+ J& d/ {" R<P>你无需担心</P>
3 g! O/ ^( M6 }* b2 T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( v' M7 h( L+ R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 Z( G4 r+ S  w/ k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 a* v, F! D% }: a! T3 a) _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, n# F3 r* `8 Y4 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 }& c! D6 ~7 E* K, j+ i9 N% a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ T4 q/ m5 g) b<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! e+ A9 @0 C" h4 ~" }- b- M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, j5 _7 G" D: Z) I( ]" F9 ^4 i" [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: ~) O: V8 U$ w: J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. Y" n0 G* v# }+ f9 s+ x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* a  e, m7 L0 Q- p$ q5 }, Z% j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* b/ r% o1 I+ T6 I# q7 P" {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 X% z, [1 Z: ^  a4 X, t5 S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 k8 \2 b, e' z* c5 K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 b/ d" w7 ?4 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* ~7 Y) G- Z* Y' @" K# ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- Y6 u; W- p& ^$ {! e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( Q: b6 m4 R, F9 [; N3 o<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! ^' e6 [2 v- o( |/ w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, e' m8 \0 u; C9 ~) n6 R4 f/ f, Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; ]) v+ |  p: c+ h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 D# D% ~/ `+ I0 r9 s* n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 ^( B3 O" W8 v5 E3 x* R% C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>